New novel – Danny’s Story – Chapter 7 – The Magic Garden and Pete

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Chapter 7 – The magic garden and Pete

For Danny venturing into the garden was like a trip without the acid. In future times he would become used to encountering numerous strange characters in pairs or singly who obviously felt the same, though they augmented the visit with the aid of additional chemistry.

Mr Rose might have been in his eighties but he had created a psychedelic jungle of the first order. Somehow he had combined the most peculiar set of incongruous objects and with the use of hanging vines and garish paint had contrived to combine them into a mind-expanding fairyland. There were fairground swing boats, plastic ornaments, seats, fountains, concrete sculptures, plastic flowers and overhanging shelters, all lit by enough light bulbs to keep Blackpool going for a season or two. At night the effect was simply amazing.

The effect when anyone first saw it was mesmerising.

Danny sat and looked at the multi-coloured universe of a garden with eyes as big as jelly-bean jars. It knocked him out of the ground.

‘Not bad is it?’ A voice said from within the dazzling lights.

‘It’s fucking incredible,’ Danny replied in a voice steeped in awe, without taking his eyes off the fairyland he was surrounded with.

‘I’m Pete,’ the silhouetted figure said, stepping out of the brightness and taking a seat next to him. Danny noted that the figure was a young man with long, shaggy black hair with long fringe hanging over his eyes, a big droopy moustache, a week’s dark stubble and an incongruous ankle-length grey RAF greatcoat. Pete grinned and pulled a ready-rolled spliff out of his shirt pocket and lit it. ‘I live in the bottom flat.’

‘I’m Danny,’ he said. ‘I’ve moved into the top flat.’

Pete nodded.

Together they sat in the brightness of the magic garden in silence, passed the jay between them like some holy sacrament, and stared at colours around them.

It was a momentous first meeting.

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Quote Challenge – Quran – Humanity is but a single Brotherhood: So make peace with your Brethren.

Thank you Shreya for challenging me with providing three quotes a day.

I do not usually like doing challenges or awards but this one quite appealed.

I shall quite enjoy sorting out three quotes a day.

I’m not sure about nominating other bloggers. I’ll have a think.

I’ve got to be sure they’d want to do it. It is a bit of a faff. Particularly if you are busy.

This is Shreya’s blog site – https://shreyasharmasite.wordpress.com/2016/04/25/quote-challenge-day-2/#respond – so check that one out.

This is the first of my quotes for today:

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If only religions selected the nice stuff from the texts we wouldn’t have a problem. Unfortunately they select the texts to support their own psychopathic urges, power madness and cruelty.

In my view making peace with your brethren (and I would include women) does not include throwing them off high buildings, burying them alive, make them sex slaves, gang raping, beheading them, crucifying them, burning them alive, drowning them, blowing their heads off with explosives, hacking them with machetes, slowly crushing them with rocks or all the other barbaric practices favoured by ISIS, Boko Haram, A Qaeda, Taliban or other fundamentalist groups.

You can twist religion to suit your power-mad games.

The Prophet said – Make Peace with your Brethren!

Might be an idea for people who believe to take note of him.

My three nominees are:

Dave Kingsbury – an intelligent voice of sanity in the midst of a sea of madness:

https://davekingsbury.wordpress.com/

Anna Cottage who should be able to come up with some great Rod McKuen quotes:

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Cheryl at Calensarial who is a font of knowledge and can knock a few interesting quotes off the top of her head

https://promptlings.wordpress.com/

And Mary at Walking my path – I’m sure she would have great nature quotes

https://marybmaulsby.wordpress.com/

There – I’ll nominate some others later!

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Anatomy-of-a-bookworm

I thought this was very amusing and clever.

New novel – Sorting the Future – rewritten chapter 6 – Abduction

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I am rewriting this story based on the editing from Chris. It is proving trickier than I first thought. You change one thing and there are ramifications that resound down the story. I am going to work this rewrite and then reread and compensate for changes in style and story line to see that it is consistent and makes sense.

I do not want to over-write or lose the simplicity and lightness.

Chapter 6 – Abduction

The four aliens left me alone in the room after showing me the way to get soft seating to materialise out of the walls and how to operate a dispenser of drinks and food and where the toilet was. There was even a holographic TV with all Earth channels and unlimited music. In other circumstances I might have been intrigued. As it was I was totally disinterested. I had too many other things on my mind.

What the hell was I doing here? How had I got myself into this mess?

I paced up and down in the room shaking my head and trying frantically to remember just what had happened and what I should do about it now. Why was my mind such a blank?

If I believed them, and I think I did. I was presently on a ship somewhere up in space. That was crazy. I’d only gone out to walk the dog. How had I let this happen?

At first I simply did not recall how I had been taken on board this ship. I presume I had been abducted. My mind was completely devoid of memories. I couldn’t recollect any decision being made. Yet I was pretty certain that I had received no threats or coercion. I had gone into it willingly. The shimmering had expanded and I had remained rooted to the spot until it enveloped me.

It was sinister. I could only think they had put me in some kind of trance, though I have no evidence to support such a premise. But I was sure I had not been myself. I’m not normally that compliant. I am not generally that brave. If I had been my usual self I would have given Sam a run for his money and I wouldn’t be here now.

I was severely conflicted. I wanted to believe that they were everything they appeared to be – nice, benign, concerned beings who had nothing but my, and the world’s, best interests at heart. Yet there was the other part of me that thought it was all a game; that they were toying with me – and that I was going to meet some ghastly fate.

What disturbed me most was working out why I had behaved in the way I had. That had not been how I normally reacted. If I could only get to the bottom of that it might shine a bit of light on everything else.

When I came round on the couch and that kind lady appeared on the screen I could have argued for them to release me. I couldn’t think why I hadn’t. I could have told them about the family and my job but those things simply did not enter my head. It was as if I was still in a daze. Besides, I was paralysed. I couldn’t move. Plus I was scared stiff. It was no wonder I had been confused. I was still confused. It is not every day you find yourself kidnapped by aliens. It would take a rare man to take that sort of thing in his stride.

I was becoming agitated again. I resolved to keep myself calm and work out a strategy.

I poured myself a drink from the dispenser. It was very zingy and refreshing. And then I sat myself down to think it through. Gradually the memory of what had occurred in that shimmering light began to surface. I hadn’t been grabbed or coerced. Four attractive young ladies had slowly walked up to me and I’d simply followed them towards some hazy object sitting in the corner of that field.

I didn’t ask where we were going or how long for. It didn’t occur to me to get a message to Liz. I had been a mindless idiot.

A ramp had slid down and the five of us walked up into the bright interior of the craft. I allowed them to walk me inside and simply sat myself down in a comfortable seat as if it was all perfectly normal, the wall slid seamlessly back into place and the four ladies joined me on the seats. In hindsight it was obvious now that they were the four aliens I had been talking with.

Not a word was spoken. It was as if this whole process was exactly what was expected to happen. There did not seem to be any doubt that I would obediently follow them into the craft. Once I was in the ship and sat down it was as if I had then inexplicably dropped off to sleep.

The next thing I knew I had woken up in the room on that couch unable to move.

Now that I had seated myself down and had that drink my mind began to work again, the memories were coming back.

There was all the business with the four aliens – they had all seemed so nice and there was all that guff about me being selected as the saviour of the planet. I didn’t believe that for a minute. Something else had to be going on here. They were leading me on to keep me compliant; so that I wouldn’t start making a fuss. I felt a great fear rise up into me again. I had heard tales of alien abductions. They were full of tales of huge probes being shoved up your anus and vivisection and weird sexual practices. Now I thought I could probably handle the weird sex but I wasn’t too keen on the other two alternatives.

Then I started thinking about Liz and the kids and the panic and upset I knew it would cause if I simply disappeared. I should have asked to go back and tell them what was happening before I had allowed myself to be led into the ship. I knew they would be distraught. I remember I had tried with some feeble, half-hearted attempt.

I had broached the subject with the four aliens after they had revealed themselves to me.

‘I have to let my wife know,’ I had told the Lady who seemed to be the one in charge.

‘I am sorry. There is no time for that,’ she replied rather dispassionately. ‘There are much more important issues to deal with. Time is of the essence.’

The thought of what would happen at work had passed through my mind but that soon evaporated into the ether. They would cope. I had returned to thinking about Liz and the kids. They would be beside themselves.

‘I have to let her know,’ I pleaded once again.

They will know soon enough,’ the woman reassured me. ‘Do not worry yourself. They will be very worried for now, but in due course they will understand that there was no other way.’

‘You do not understand,’ I begged, ‘she will be absolutely out of her mind. It will only take a few minutes. I have to let her know.’

The pleasant lady had stared at me glumly.

‘We cannot deviate from the plan. It would take a lot longer than you think. Your wife and children would ask questions. They would be just as upset by the thought of you coming with us. It would not take a few minutes. You know that is not true. Besides, it would complicate issues.’

I found myself thinking about what all those complications might be. The thought of police, newspapers and the military came to mind.

Besides, the time to do anything of that sort had already gone. We were probably the other side of the moon by now.

Without feeling any great thrust or sensation of movement I still knew we were already airborne and travelling at great speed. Contacting Liz was already not an option.

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New novel – Sorting the Future – Chapter 5 – Sam the dog.

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Chapter 5 – Trouble at home

When Sam had turned up back at home howling at the gate it had set alarm bells ringing. Liz knew something was up. She let him in and he made a bee-line for his bed, curled himself up and whimpered pathetically. He never normally did that.

Liz was worried. Sam’s behaviour had unnerved her. When I did not appear in the next few minutes, that fear only grew deeper. In her imagination I had been attacked by some maniac who had planted an axe in my brain. Probably some Jihadi nutcase who was incensed at what I was putting up on my blog. She could picture me lying in a ditch down the lane with my severed head lying beside me.

But what could she do? She couldn’t go ringing the police. I’d only been gone a couple of hours. They would only, very superciliously, tell her to wait. They would not value the strange behaviour of a dog in the same way that its owners would. Dogs did peculiar things – they were dogs. To report someone missing because he was late back from taking the dog for a walk was laughable. To them even a few days was nothing. In police eyes people were as bad as dogs.

Liz decided that the best course of action was to simply go and find me. Twilight had set in now and the lane was a different, more foreboding place, in the dark. Liz’s anxiety was now firmly fixed on the more likely scenario that I had fallen over and injured myself or had suffered a heart attack and was now lying unconscious slowly dying. Every second counted. It was imperative that she found me quickly.

She rounded up the kids on the basis that there was safety in numbers, and the more of them there were the more quickly they were going to find me. She got another lead for the dog but Sam refused to budge. He felt secure in his bed and he was staying there. The last place on earth he wanted to go was anywhere near that back lane. It was no longer his favourite place. In fact he had decided that he was never going there again. He’d gone off walks altogether. So much for Sam the Wonder Dog – protector of the family.

Reluctantly Liz left him there. With great trepidation the family set off into the dimming light. It only usually took half an hour to get to the end of the lane. They figured that it shouldn’t be too difficult to locate me. I tended to keep to the path.

They were wrong.

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New novel – Sorting the future – Chapter 4 – ????

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Chapter 4 – Selected

Well being abducted by aliens is quite a thing to come to terms with. It certainly took me a while to adjust and I was a Sci-fi buff. I was already steeped in it. It should have been easier for the likes of me.

I don’t know if it was just the effects of whatever had knocked me out wearing off or if the aliens did something, but the paralysis wore off and I found I could move about – that made me feel a bit better.

After I had been subjected to an intensive reassuring programme on the screen the aliens thought that I was doing well enough to be subjected to the real thing. The screen disappeared back up in the ceiling. A door slid aside and four humanoid beings glided cautiously into the room, moving very slowly and taking great care not to spook me.

I looked at them carefully. They all appeared identical to each other – humanoid, about five feet tall, with perfectly smooth bodies, two slender legs, two arms, no hint of joints like elbows or knees, and those smooth heads with two enormous eyes. They glowed with a golden luminescence that seemed to radiate from within them. They also seemed to exude calmness. If anything my anxiety levels went down. I could sense that they meant me no harm. Now I’m not sure, even to this day, if those bodies had any resemblance to their real form. I suspect they merely created an image of themselves which conformed to human opinions of what aliens looked like.

Well there was no going back now. I really was on some vessel with aliens. I was beginning not to doubt that, though a part of me still thought it was a dream.

One of them stepped forward and began to speak. The others followed a step behind.

‘We are sorry that we frightened you and had to put you through this unpleasant experience,’ he said.

‘We have selected you to represent us and lead your world to a better future,’ the aliens informed me as they all came to a halt directly in front of where I was standing. There is nothing like being straight to the point. This was not so much – ‘take me to your leader’ as – ‘we’ve decided that you are the leader’.

It took me a while to digest the words. They had selected me to save the world.

That seemed absurd to me. I almost burst out laughing. I thought my brain must be playing up. I was having delusions. The whole business was ridiculous on every level. I would wake up in hospital and everything would be back to normal.

Firstly I could not see how he was talking to me. His lips did not move and he was speaking perfect English. For some reason I found that amusing. This was like a scene out of some second-rate TV Sci-fi drama. Secondly I had never been selected for anything. I had never won the lottery or any other thing of note. That was probably partly due to the fact that I was never stupid enough to bet on anything or enter any competitions. Betting was for idiots. I saw where the proceeds of betting went and who got fat on them. But it wasn’t just in things of that nature – in everything else I was one of the also rans. I was not a winner. I was last to be selected for any team. I did not have the skills, talent or inclination. I dreaded public speaking; the thought of it turned me to jelly, so I avoided all events that would put me in such situations.

Now a bunch of aliens were telling me I had been selected to be saviour of the world. That did not strike me as being plausible. Indeed, it was hilarious.

One minute I had been happily walking the dog, tasting the air and delighting in the pleasantness of the evening and the next instant I am confronted by an interstellar alien informing me that I was to be their chosen redeemer of the planet. It was a lot to take in. It was plain daft. I looked around for the camera crew. It had to be a set-up, didn’t it?

‘I’m sorry,’ I replied lamely, in a croaky voice, ‘can you repeat that?’

‘Opher Goodwin,’ the alien continued, unfazed by my bewildered reaction. ‘We have selected you to be our representative on the planet Earth. We have selected you to lead the people of this planet into a better future.’

I floundered, looking around for some excuse. ‘But I am not able.’ I stuttered. ‘I don’t have the ability. There are far better people than me.’

‘No, you are wrong,’ the alien continued unfazed by my ineptitude,’ you have all the attributes we seek.’

‘I am not clever enough,’ I continued in utter disbelief. ‘I couldn’t do it.’ The thought of leading seven billion people was preposterous. It would mean going on TV and talking to nations. It sent shivers through me. I was standing in a field in the dying embers of the day, holding a preposterous conversation with four escapees from Star trek. How much more ridiculous could things get?

‘I think you’ve got the wrong person,’ I mumbled, peering suspiciously at the four shimmering, orange beings. This had to be a joke didn’t it? ‘There are far better qualified people than me.’

‘No,’ the alien insisted. ‘We have studied you for some time and we have selected you. You have all the attributes we need. What you lack we will provide and with our full backing you will be able to achieve everything.’

The walls of, what I now presumed was a spacecraft, did not waver and neither did the aliens. They appeared, for all their shimmering, to be substantial. No matter how much I blinked they refused to go away.

I slowly managed to get it into my head that this was really happening, they were real aliens and I was being offered the job of saving the world.

The idea sent me spinning. I had been selected by super-beings to save the world. It was absurd. But I had to admit there was a part of me that was quite flattered and liked the sound of Opher Goodwin – Saviour of the planet Earth.

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Danny’s Story – Chapter 5 – What do you think?

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I am currently on chapter 45 of this. It is still going along nicely. Obviously this is the first draft so it will have to be tidied up a bit. I am writing at a fast rate and doing two books at the same time.

I would be grateful for any suggestions. I can address issues in the rewrite. It is hard when you are subjective. An objective eye can spot things more easily.

Chapter 5 – Diane and Bowie

It was very romantic. They met by the fridge they shared. He, all bleary eyed, hair all over the place, yawning and rubbing his belly, emerging from his door in crumpled T-shirt and underpants, her looking immaculate in an clinging black dress with long black hair tumbling over her shoulders.

They both froze, shocked at bumping into each other so unexpectedly.

Diane had been away in Birmingham, staying with friends and catching a Bowie concert. She was mad about Bowie.

As far as Danny was concerned Bowie was alright but nothing too special. He was too keen about becoming famous at all costs as far as Danny was concerned. But Diane idolised him.

Danny was immediately attracted. Perhaps it was the slim body and long dark hair, the tantalisingly red lips or beatnik black clinging dress that did it. Or it might have been that days had passed since he broke up with Cheryl and every female of a certain age was becoming more alluring by the minute.

It seemed that Diane was not adverse to Danny either, despite his dishevelled appearance. That was good because they were next-door neighbours and they shared a fridge.

She, gathering her wits first, invited him in for a coffee. Danny wondered if he ought to get dressed first. They laughed.

Danny went and quickly got himself as presentable as he could manage. It didn’t take long. He breathlessly rushed back to Diane’s and rapped on the door. Diane had set the table. She actually had a table, and chairs. Her flat looked interesting with lots of books, artwork on the walls, photographs, incense burners, Indian pattern cushions and throws, delicate Thai Buddhas and dancing girls. He looked round in wonder. It seemed to him like a cross between Aladdin’s Cave and an eastern bazaar.

Diane had been busy. She’d already made the coffee – real coffee in a cafeteria. The scent filled the room, along with a delicate hint of incense.

Coffee turned into breakfast with toast and marmalade. Then breakfast turned into lunch and they sat on the big cushions and talked. They talked about their lives and where they’d come from. Diane about her travelling through India, Morocco and Thailand. Danny about his student days, music and failed relationship.

Lunch turned into an evening meal and they were still talking and smiling.

That first night was great. They sat up all night drinking wine, smoking jays, playing Bowie and talking. There was a lot of laughter and giggling. Diane had a big mattress on the floor with an Indian print bedspread. She sat cross-legged in some tantric yoga position that looked excruciating. They fell about giggling a lot. Danny expounded on the nature of reality and infinity. Diane was profound when it came to Bowie’s use of costume and mime in his act.

As more wine and spliff were consumed Danny was beginning to concede that there might be more to Bowie than he had thought. The music sounded OK but then it couldn’t stand up to the likes of Beefheart and Harper. At one point he went and grabbed a few albums to demonstrate this to her. She listened politely but he could see that she was not convinced.

As dawn broke, the light streamed in through the window and they made sweetly on that mattress. It was intense, passionate and as natural as breathing.

Diane dropped off to sleep and carefully Danny extricated himself and dressed. He looked out the window out onto the patio and garden. Mr Rose was already out. He was touching up the paint on the patio. It was a big flat layer of concrete on storey up. He’d painted it in an intricate design of bright colours that was almost a mandala, a psychedelic pattern. There he was with a paintbrush tied on a stick so that he did not have to bend down. The tins of paint were lined up and he was carefully applying colours.

Danny watched him at work.

A man has got to have a purpose; he’s got to have a creative outlet. He could see that Mr Rose was pouring his into that garden. He would have to investigate more. He’d heard about the fabled garden but had not yet ventured into it.

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New novel – Sorting the future – Chapter 2 – any views?

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This is more of a novella than a novel. I am presently rewriting it following discussions with my trusty editor. It is going well.

It is a yarn. I went for pace so it is light on description and characterisation. I hope it works for you. Please let me know what you think.

Chapter 2 – The Pub

Sunday afternoons were usually lively affairs and this Sunday had been typical. We were a group of friends who regularly met up for a good old chin-wag – putting the world right. The guys would invariably gather round one table with their pints where they could glimpse the footie while the girls gathered round the other and did their thing. Their table invariably had a lot more laughter and giggling. Ours was fun in a different way. We talked, argued and ranted a lot. We were an unholy alliance of disparate characters. There was a great passion in our thoughts and beliefs. It was what made us tick. We took ourselves seriously and despaired at the state of the world. Whether we enjoyed it or not we gained a lot of strength from each other’s company. There was a real bond between us. I think we saw ourselves as the seven musketeers without swords or muskets. We were all pacifists through and through.

Our sessions were always quite animated and this one more than usual. Clive started it all off. He nearly always set the tone.

‘I see another of those wankers has gone and blown himself up outside another mosque,’ he observed morosely. ‘Another indoctrinated fool told to expect eternal paradise and unlimited virgins. God knows where all those virgins are going to be sourced from.’

Clive was a devout antitheist, a big strong man with a mood often as dark as his hair and beard. He was a brooding man who always thought deeply about things, but was not slow in coming forward. His square jaw, intense brown eyes and passionate voice gave gravity to anything he said. Strangers did not argue with Clive when he launched into one of his diatribes even if they disagreed with what he said. He was a formidable man. Clive was of the opinion that all the world’s problems were caused by religion and superstition and the sooner we moved out of the Dark Ages the better. He firmly believed that religion only caused division and hatred and wasted everybody’s time and effort. His contention was that if the energy used on building mosques, temples and cathedrals, and the time and effort used on pointless prayer and worship was devoted to solving the world’s problems we’d be living in paradise right now. It was an argument he put forward at every opportunity.

‘It’s all about power,’ John chipped in disparagingly. Despite the fact that he was half Clive’s size he was never daunted by his physicality. John may have been little, balding and less daunting a figure, but more than compensated for his lack of physical stature with his dynamism. He was prone to excitability and displayed his nervous predisposition with his animated, quick little movements, jerky like a twitchy bird. But John was utterly fearless. When he got going he’d face down a horde of angry men. Ruth had her work cut out keeping him in check, but somehow, she succeeded. ‘There’s a huge global power struggle going on. The West is stirring it up for their own gain. They love to cause chaos and exploit it. Religion is one of their favourite ploys. Those idiots are being used.’

John was a firebrand of a Trade Union who was a committed Marxist. He saw everything in terms of a power struggle. In his eyes the world would not be right until the masses rose up and took power. Then they would create a fair system where no-one would be exploited and everyone would live happily ever after. He always took exception to anyone equating what had happened in Russia, China and Cambodia with communism. In his eyes they had been examples of tyranny. He chose to focus on the best side of Castro’s Cuba and the promise of Peron in Argentina.

‘It is only deflecting attention from the real crisis going on,’ Brian interrupted before John could get into his swing. Brian spoke softly with his usual thoughtfulness. He was six foot and well padded, but always looked small when sitting next to Clive. His strength was in the depth of his mind. He was so moved by what was happening to the natural world that he seemed to live in a constant brooding anger. ‘Politics and religion are important but the environment is the real issue. The species eradication is spiralling. The deforestation is taking a chunk the size of Wales each month and global warming is going to swamp the world. We’ll all be breathing water by the end of the century. That’s the real issue. If we do not get our act together soon it will be too late and we’ll all be wiped out.’

Brian was an environmentalist of the first order. He went on all the marches and protests and was a fully paid up member of Greenpeace and Friends of the Earth with a number of direct actions to his credit that had earned him a few convictions and special police attention. He was passionate and dismayed by what was happening to the planet. He thought we were raping it.

‘I agree with Brian but I still think it’s simply a question of numbers,’ Gary insisted intensely. He shook his head sadly and his fine fair hair, the colour of yellow straw, swayed like a curtain around his finely sculpted features. His blue eyes shone with Scandinavian Viking vitality. ‘There’s far too big a population. It’s not sustainable. That is the cause of the crisis. We have to stop the increase and get down from seven billion to a sustainable four billion. Then there wouldn’t be any of these crises with the environment, all the migration, poverty, pollution and all the rest. We could live in harmony.’

Gary was another environmentalist but he was more of a one issue pragmatist. His argument was that the population size was driving all the fundamentalism, political power madness, war, economic chaos, poverty, inequality, pollution and environmental destruction. In fact he probably blamed population size if the village shop ran out of milk. Everything that went wrong was because there were too many people. All we needed to do was drastically reduce the world’s population and most of the problems would disappear.

‘Might not have to wait too long,’ Chris interrupted brightly; his exuberance and joviality belying the seriousness of his feelings. Chris was always chirpy and light-hearted but that was only his personality and had little to do with the nature of his thoughts. They were much deeper than showed on the surface. ‘There’s bound to be a catastrophe soon.’

‘Oh yes?’ Brian retorted. ‘And which one is that going to be this week?’

‘Take your pick from the usual suspects,’ Chris continued, unaffected by Brian’s cynicism. He was only a little, ordinary looking guy but he had a personality that could fill a room. He might look small and mousy but inside he was monumental. ‘This could be the week that the Yellowstone Caldera collapses and swamps two thirds of the United States with larva and sends us into a nuclear winter. Or perhaps a comet will plummet into us. Or a new virus will wipe us out. It could even be Korea spiralling us into a nuclear war. I doubt we’ll have to wait too long. Certainly not long enough for any global warming to drown us all.’

Chris was a firm believer in the disaster theory. He’d watched every disaster movie going and believed all of them. It was merely a question of time until a catastrophe swept human beings into a thin band in the fossil record. In Chris’s opinion not nearly enough money was being directed into solid scientific research. He felt we should be scouring space for comets and funding antiviral research instead of wasting it on stupid weaponry. Chris was one of the most cheerful people going, probably because he was reconciled to his, and our, imminent fate.

Then there was Pete, our Pete. If ever a group had a heart then it was encompassed in Pete and his cherubic face framed with fair curly hair. His cheerful, kind-hearted personality was the glue that held us together. Every group of people needed a Pete.

‘Perhaps we should start small,’ Pete suggested. ‘Focus more on the things we can influence. I think we should concentrate on the areas we can make a real difference with, get involved with local issues, form pressure groups, and join up with local politics and making positive changes to the world around us. We could make people’s lives better; make a real impact.’

Pete was always for helping people. That was his raison d’etre. Pete was forever the eternal optimist, so sweet and cheerful. His mind mirrored his pleasant looks and that made him all the girls’ favourite. They loved to mother him. He was so cuddly. And if the truth was known we all loved him too. People didn’t get more kind and charming than Pete.

It was the start of a lively session that got quite heated at times. It was quite unusual to have such a group of deep thinking, caring and compassionate intelligent people all living in one small community. It certainly fuelled the imagination and brought the mind into focus. Nothing was off limits.

The girls were the practical ones though. Rather than merely sounding off they organised the Fair Trade goods, local produce and environmentally friendly produce. They actually made a difference. They were the ones who made the practical changes. It seems that they did not really need to spout off like the lads. They knew what they thought and were content. They had a much more light-hearted gathering.

As for me – well I agreed with all of them. I thought every one of them made valid points from their different perspectives. I loved our gatherings and liked to join in the heated debates that always ensued. They were invigorating and never failed to help me coalesce my own thoughts into something more coherent.

They were a funny bunch – but hey – these were my friends, the people who helped channel my thoughts and sensibilities. They made me who I was.

There was a downside to it though, as I nearly always left our little discussions feeling despondent. There did not seem any point to it. We were impotent. There was nothing we could do about anything. Humanity, in my opinion, was being guided by a group of psychotic multibillionaires who were motivated by greed. All they were interested in was personal gain. With their slogan of ‘progress and expansion’ they were bulldozing the forests to exploit the natural resources, buying off politicians, flouting international laws, and leading us down a cul-de-sac towards destruction. That’s how it seemed to me. We were cogs in the machine.

We were so far into this capitalist dream that there seemed no way of slowing it. Nobody seemed at all keen on dealing with any of the real issues. It looked to me as if we were doomed and there was nothing we could do about it. We all talked about it, did our little bit in our own way but we were largely helpless when confronted with the forces driving the world forward. We were grains of sand on a beach of indifference.

So it was no surprise that I chose them to form the first global government. They had what was needed. I could trust them. They cared. If anyone could get the planet back into shape, they could. They knew what was wrong. The boys had the passion and zeal and the girls knew how to channel it into action.

You’ve just met my cabinet.

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New Sci-fi Novel – Sorting the Future – the cover

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The unanimous choice for the cover was the above! (Thank you Anna).

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New Sci-fi Novel – Sorting the Future – the verdict

I have just returned from a meeting with my editor. He has been editing the Sci-fi book – Sorting the future – which I wrote while away on my voyage to South America.

The book weighs in at just over 50,000 words which makes it too long for a short story and too short for a novel. It is a novella.

I was in two minds as to whether to develop the characterisation and description to make it weightier and give more gravity as a novel or to keep it shorter, less detailed and zippier.

My editor through that I should keep it largely as it is. He liked the fast pace and light touch. It is better as a novella rather than a novel.

That is what I am going to do. There were a number of areas he wanted me to develop and a postscript to the ending. I shall work on that over the next week or so.

So thank you to Chris Moody for the ideas and time spent correcting, editing and improving my draft. You’re a star!