New novel – Sorting the Future – Chapter 11 – The Process

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Chapter 11 – The process

Long before the guys back on Earth had even completed their preliminary search for me I found myself escorted to the tank. I don’t know what else to call it. It was a tank of warm fluid. I can tell you I was terrified. I did not know what they were going to do with me. Despite all their assurances they were asking a whole lot of trust. When faced with the reality of my decision I was no longer convinced. Besides, undressing in front of aliens you hardly know is kind of embarrassing, even if they did not appear unduly interested.

They attached pads to various parts of my body. The pads gripped. It was completely painless but I could sense things probing down into my tissues and I could see my blood beginning to flow out down these narrow tubes into the unit in the back of the tank. Then I could see it flowing back along other tubes. It was all rather alarming. But they must have been adding something to the blood because instantly all my fears subsided and I began to feel mellow and dreamy. Even when they lowered me into the tank and I started to breathe in the amber fluid, no panic rose up in me. I just lay back and inhaled the fluid into my lungs. It felt natural and good. My mind was completely at rest and I gave myself over to the process. All my worries simply floated away.

While Liz was packing the kids off to school and being interviewed by the rather dispassionate police, I was laid in a tank of warm fluid with tiny tendrils penetrating every tissue of my body. I could feel them massaging and tickling as they performed their task. While Liz was working herself into a silent hysteria I was mindlessly dreaming while my blood was passing back and forth through that machinery as it was being cleansed. There was no hint of concern left in me. I dreamed with a smile on my face. In my head, even as the tendrils were summoning up my dendrites to create their dense tangles of thought, while they cleansed the protein plaque and metabolic impurities, I dreamed of being President and putting everything right. It was so unfair but I had never been happier.

While Liz was trying desperately to comfort the children and reassure them that Daddy was perfectly alright and would be home safe and sound soon, I was lying back in some weird ecstasy while fats, impurities and metabolites were leached from my tissues, my cells were super charged and my genes repaired.

The process actually took days – long enough for the police to start taking my disappearance seriously, even to the point of circulating photos, checking at ports and looking at CCTV cameras. They even dredged the canal. But nobody reported any Opher Goodwin hitching a ride, or found a body washed up on the shore. My disappearance remained a complete mystery.

For Liz and the kids it was a nightmare. I had gone missing without trace. She’d taken the kids out of school and our mothers had both come up ‘to help’. Though what possible use that would be, was beyond me. They were more nuisance than help. Life for Liz and the kids took on a strange unreality. They lived day to day, minute to minute, poised for a knock on the door or phone call. Every moment expecting and imagining the worst. It was unreal. Meals were take-aways and eaten mechanically. Friends called in and joined in the searches of nearby land.

What had happened to me remained a mystery.

Meanwhile I lay back and smiled, in a world where I was President and everything was wonderful. It was better than crystal meth.

It simply was not fair.

Finally the process was over. All the blood was returned and the tendrils slid out of my tissues – job done.

They lifted me out of the tank and I breathed air again. At first I was a bit wobbly and had to find my strength and balance. But within minutes I felt alive like never before. My body sung and my mind was so clear. The thoughts streamed into my head. I could feel the energy. They had done exactly what they said they would do. They had not merely rejuvenated me; they had made me more perfect than I could have ever dreamed. I was a superman. But I still felt intrinsically me. It was still my own body and mind. I even looked like me and not Brad Pitt. Though I presume they could have done that as well if I had wanted. I could have become six foot six – muscular and handsome. Part of me wished I’d asked.

They led me to a reflecting surface and I studied the results. It was still the same ugly, squat me, except I looked twenty years younger, my body was lean and gleamed with vitality, my eyes shone and I looked good. I was me but I was the new improved model and it showed. I wondered what Liz would make of it?

That immediately brought me down to earth. While I had been revitalising, Liz and the kids had been in living hell. I could imagine.

‘How long have I been in there?’

‘The process took seven days.’

I was appalled. I allowed myself to be shown the residue. The fat, bacteria and metabolites that had been sucked out of my system looked repulsive.

‘Your system has been successfully optimised,’ I was informed. ‘The defects have been rectified and the systems tweaked. You will never age or deteriorate again. Your death will be far off.’

That sounded good to me – at least it sounded as if that might be good. Of course it could turn out to be something I’d live to regret. Living for ages might turn out to have its downsides.

I thanked them. They nodded.

‘We also removed a thousand and seventy three cancers.’

A thousand and seventy three cancers! I was staggered. It sounded like I was near death. It was lucky they came along when they did. A day or two later and I might not have been here.

‘Do not be concerned. Everybody has them. Your immune system would have dealt with them. Now, with the gene damage repaired, they won’t ever return. It is rare for any of them to grow into full blown cancer. They arise and are dealt with. We have merely eradicated all of yours.’

I was suitably grateful but my mind was moving on.

‘Can I get a message to Liz and the children?’ I enquired desperately, moving straight to the anxiety that was eating away at me.

They did not reply but I knew the answer. My mind had already run through the reasons. They hadn’t supercharged it for nothing. There was a big picture. It was a small but necessary grief in the big scheme of things.

‘Right,’ I said with determination, ‘let’s get on with it. There is no time to waste. The sooner we get this started the sooner I can rescue Liz and the kids from their nightmare.’

The aliens nodded. I think they were relieved at my resolve.

Science Fiction books:

 

Ebola in the Garden of Eden – paperback £6.95 Kindle £2.56 (or free on unlimited)

 

https://www.amazon.co.uk/Ebola-Garden-Eden-Opher-Goodwin/dp/1514878216/ref=sr_1_11?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1461831172&sr=1-11&keywords=opher+goodwin

 

Green – paperback £9.98 Kindle £2.56 (or free on unlimited)

 

https://www.amazon.co.uk/Green-Opher-Goodwin/dp/1514122294/ref=sr_1_17?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1461831333&sr=1-17&keywords=opher+goodwin

 

Rock Music books

 

In Search of Captain Beefheart – paperback £6.91 Kindle £1.99 (or free on unlimited)

 

https://www.amazon.co.uk/Search-Captain-Beefheart-Opher-Goodwin/dp/1502820455/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=146183144

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Other selected books and novels:

 

Anecdotes-Weird-Science-Writing-Ramblings – a book of anecdotes mainly from the sixties and other writing.

 

https://www.amazon.co.uk/Anecdotes-Weird-Science-Writing-Ramblings/dp/1519675631/ref=sr_1_9?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1461832001&sr=1-9&keywords=opher+goodwin

 

More Anecdotes – following the immense popularity of the first volume I produced a second

 

https://www.amazon.co.uk/More-Anecdotes-Essays-Beliefs-flotsam/dp/1530770262/ref=sr_1_5?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1461832001&sr=1-5&keywords=opher+goodwin

 

Goofin’ with the cosmic freaks – a kind of On the Road for the sixties

 

https://www.amazon.co.uk/Goofin-Cosmic-Freaks-Opher-Goodwin/dp/1500860247/ref=sr_1_13?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1461832001&sr=1-13&keywords=opher+goodwin

The book of Ginny – a novel

 

 

In Britain :

http://www.amazon.co.uk/Opher-Goodwin/e/B00MSHUX6Y/ref=sr_tc_2_0?qid=1461306850&sr=1-2-ent

 

In America:

http://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_noss?url=search-alias%3Dstripbooks&field-keywords=opher+goodwin

In all other countries around the world check out your regional Amazon site and Opher Goodwin books.

 

 

New novel – Danny’s story – Chapter 11 – the realm of Pete

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This book is finished in first draft. It is presently weighing in at 46,000 words. Which is light for a novel. After the rewrite it may creep up a bit. Any suggestions on how to develop it further?

Chapter 11 – The realm of Pete

Danny rolled up with a bottle of red plonk and three carefully constructed jays. It was a thank you. On the way down the stairs he got a whiff of the pungent smell seeping under John’s door and bumped into Mr McDoud, in his shoe-length overcoat, heading back in from his day out propping up a park bench.

‘Allriet,’ Mr McDoud muttered, glowering at him blearily.

‘Yeah,’ Danny replied. ‘Doing grand. And you and the Mrs?’

Mr McDoud grunted and muttered something in rich indecipherable dialect while fiddling with his key in the lock.

At the bottom of the steps Jeanie and Sandy were setting off to work in their wigs, high-heels and skimpy tight dresses. Danny watched them totter off, Sandy holding on to Jeanie’s arm and giggling something into her ear. Whatever it was seemed to be hilarious and they both fell about. They seemed happy.

Danny hadn’t been in Pete’s abode. It was the basement flat that opened on to the wondrous garden.

He rapped on the door.

‘Come in, my old dearie,’ Pete said with a big beaming smile. He motioned Danny to sit down on the settee. It felt cold in the room, kind of damp, and he noted Pete still had his old air force greatcoat on. No free leccy in Pete’s place. Pete lit the paraffin stove which immediately filled the room with pungent fumes but at least started emitting some heat. He filled a kettle and placed it on top of the stove. ‘Cuppa crobes for later,’ he said grinning.

Danny was too busy looking round the place. It was like a cross between a workshop, museum, music shop and laboratory. There was stuff all over the place and a set of weird contraptions. He wasn’t sure what crobes was but he was up for it.

‘Sounds good,’ Danny said, grinning back at Pete. Pete’s dark tussled hair looked untidier than usual and there was a good few days growth between his droopy tash and siddies. ‘What you been up to?’ Danny reached down and lit the first of the jays through a hole in the paraffin stove.

‘I’ve been putting together this light show,’ Pete enthused. ‘You sit back and I’ll show you.’ He dug around in the back and put an album on. It was Frank Zappa and the Mothers – a good choice on any day. ‘For ambience,’ Pete explained, still dabbling about with a mass of wires. Danny handed him the joint. He took a puff and handed it straight back and continued to fiddle around with a spaghetti of wiring.

Danny saw the five harmoniums piled up in the corner. Two of them had been taken apart. Probably Pete scavenging them for parts. On the wall, hanging from nails, were a variety of weird musical instruments.

‘What are those?’ Danny asked.

Pete looked up from tracing the mass of wiring, clicked in a plug. ‘That’s it,’ he exclaimed, looking pleased with himself. ‘Those are my manoyukes and guitallelles.’

Danny saw a bunch of cut-outs of wood in similar shapes. ‘You make these?’

Pete looked up from a projector that he was fitting a slide drum in. ‘Yeah. I make them.’

Danny handed him the jay and sat back. The room was getting warm enough not to freeze the knackers off a mosquito. In an hour or so he was sure he’d be able to take his coat off.

Pete took down a couple of his weirdly shaped creations and handed one to Danny along with the Jay. ‘You play that one and I’ll pitch in with this.’

‘I can’t play,’ Danny protested.

‘Doesn’t matter,’ Pete assured him. ‘Strum along to Zappa. You’ll pick it up.’ With that he flicked out the lights and turned on the projector. The whole wall lit up with a mass of crinkly psychedelic colour.

‘That’s cool,’ Danny said. ‘You got any glasses?’ He was opening the bottle of plonk.

‘No,’ Pete said. ‘But I’ve got a couple of mugs.’

‘That’ll do.’ Danny said. ‘That is one weird light-show.’

‘You’ve not seen anything yet,’ Pete assured him. He’d been rummaging around some more and come up with a baked bean tin with the top and bottom cut out so it was a tube. He set up a little motor in front of the projector and put the tin on it so that it slowly rotated and the beam from the projector shone through it. As it went round the colours changed.

‘’Wow!’ Danny said, sitting back into the sofa and taking it in. ‘I’ve not seen anything like that.’

‘No,’ Pete agreed. ‘I’ve been playing around with polarised light. That drum has a polarised sheet in it. As the light shines through it it’s changed.’

They settled back to finish the joints and wine as Floyd and Zappa provided the backdrop with Oldfield thrown in, the wall pulsated with colour, lighthouses flashed on and off, streets lit up and hills were illuminated. While Pete and Danny strummed along to the music.

The room filled with magic. Even Danny’s strumming fitted in.

Crobes turned out to be coffee. The kettle took an hour to boil but it the crobes was excellent.

Other selected books and novels:

 

Anecdotes-Weird-Science-Writing-Ramblings – a book of anecdotes mainly from the sixties and other writing.

 

https://www.amazon.co.uk/Anecdotes-Weird-Science-Writing-Ramblings/dp/1519675631/ref=sr_1_9?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1461832001&sr=1-9&keywords=opher+goodwin

 

More Anecdotes – following the immense popularity of the first volume I produced a second

 

https://www.amazon.co.uk/More-Anecdotes-Essays-Beliefs-flotsam/dp/1530770262/ref=sr_1_5?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1461832001&sr=1-5&keywords=opher+goodwin

 

Goofin’ with the cosmic freaks – a kind of On the Road for the sixties

 

https://www.amazon.co.uk/Goofin-Cosmic-Freaks-Opher-Goodwin/dp/1500860247/ref=sr_1_13?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1461832001&sr=1-13&keywords=opher+goodwin

The book of Ginny – a novel

 

 

In Britain :

http://www.amazon.co.uk/Opher-Goodwin/e/B00MSHUX6Y/ref=sr_tc_2_0?qid=1461306850&sr=1-2-ent

 

In America:

http://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_noss?url=search-alias%3Dstripbooks&field-keywords=opher+goodwin

In all other countries around the world check out your regional Amazon site and Opher Goodwin books.