Poetry – You Breathe My Breath – a love poem for old love.

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You Breathe My Breath

When you live with someone for nearly fifty years it is as though you are one. Everything about you has been affected, adjusted and adapted as you learn to rub along.

You have, not only a shared past, but share visions for the future.

Everything we do has been refined as we learn from each other. Both of us would be the less if the other were not there.

We have someone to share stories, bounce ideas off, to lean on and gain perspective, to share wisdom and see more objectively.

Two heads are always better than one. We see things from different angles. We have different strengths, different weaknesses.

Together we are stronger, more confident and better.

You cannot reach so high when you haven’t got a steady shoulder to lean on.

I am a better person.

 

You Breathe My Breath

You breathe my breath.

You read my mind.

You share my dreams

And all we find.

You wonder with me

And are safe and sound.

In the flood of life

We’re on higher ground.

 

You’re my safety line

Whenever I fall

That voice of sense

For me to recall.

You’re my compass

And my steering wheel

My fulcrum point

That makes life real.

 

All I am

Is because of you

All I am

Is because of you

All I am

All I am

 

Opher 5.12.2015

 

 

35 thoughts on “Poetry – You Breathe My Breath – a love poem for old love.

    1. It came into my head as I was drifting off to sleep. Normally if I don’t write them down there and then they are forgotten. But I hung on to this one and it resurfaced in the morning. Thanks JJ.

  1. This is so sweet, Opher. You two are fortunate to have had such a deep, adventuresome life together. Nearly 50 years is a long time. History together like that is phenomenal I am so happy you have each other.
    peace
    Mary

  2. You are indeed fortunate to share such love together. Once would be just nice to have such, marriage can be such a cold place if only one really loves.

    1. Yes I am. Relationships are hard. Liz feels neglected at the moment. She thinks I spend far too much time writing.

      1. I can appreciate your Wife’s view, I felt neglected by my Husband for different reasons, yes relationships are hard even harder when only one of you really cares, I am sure your Wife is very proud of you.

      2. Exacerbated is the word. I think she would feel a bit different if I was moderately successful. She thinks I’m obsessive. She has a point.

      1. That is true but it is usually the only thing I want to do. That is hard for people around. They think I do everything else grudgingly.

  3. Beautiful are we allowed to share it? You are my forget me not, and inner sanctuary,when I lost the plot, truly thanks from me x

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