Does anybody out there want to take on the task of reading, criticising and suggesting changes for a work in progress??
I have completed the second draft of a Sci-fi novel called Schizoid. It is the sequel to Quantum fever but has been written as a stand alone.
I am presently writing another Sci-fi novel called Farm 703. I am shortly going to get back to Schizoid to start to write a third draft. It would be extremely valuable to me to get some objective comments on what I need to do to improve the novel in that third redrafting.
Anybody fancy the challenge?
You don’t need any great skills – just an opinion and a critical eye.
Ok, ma man, if you think I’m up to it I’d certainly volunteer.
And it so happens I have just been re-establishing contact with the sci-fi world.
Is there a time limit? I understand, of course, the quicker the better so you can crack on redrafting.
Whadda you think?
Thanks Michael. That would be great.
Please acknowledge receipt and keep me posted with your thoughts.
Yes, sorry about that – arrived safe n sound. About to dive in. Best wishings.
Cheers – Patiently waiting to hear!
I’m not great with grammar but I love being a judgy cunt!
sory if I should not have said cunt
That’s OK – I’m not easily offended.
Just what I need. I want to make it better so I need some judgement. I’ll send it through to you.
Excellent!
On it’s way. Let us know if it arrived!
I’ve just emailed you back. This is great!
Cheers Maggie – read on – I need the criticism.
I’ll try to think of some mean things to say
=)
Not too mean – I’m very sensitive – constructive criticism, improvements. Just to identify what is not working.
Oh gotcha. Lol it’s really good. No meanness needed.
Well that’s good to hear. How far are you in?
I didn’t get much farther last night but I plan to read more tonight and send you my thoughts
Excellento!
let me know if I can vounteer.. i would love to do that
Hi Biblio – thanks for the offer. I’ve already published Schizoid but if you can read fast I would sure like an opinion on Farm 703 – my latest Sci-fi novel. What do you reckon?
Yaah sure
I’ll send it through.
Okk sure
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