Ripples
This was inspired by Calansariel who puts nice comments on my blog. She was talking about how energy never wears out but goes on for ever and so, in effect, so do we.
I have this crazy notion that we are all connected by this zeitgeist we produce and so had the inspiration to meld the two ideas together; our energy rippling out to touch everyone around us and help create the mental climate of the future.
We are building the zeitgeist in which we flourish. We can make it positive and change the world for the better.
Our mental ripples will caress humanity for the rest of time.
It’s a nice thought.
The poem is exactly as it came out of my head just now. It probably needs a lot of work – this is it raw. I’ll work on it later.
Ripples
Ripples in an infinite sea
Of energy
And possibility.
Brushing minds
As they pass,
Forever.
Swirling the thoughts
Emotions
So clever
They evade credibility.
Ripples of a life
From you and me
To echo
Through time
Whatever
The weather.
Touching
Most intimately
Our dreams
Wishes
And schemes
As we alter
The climate
In which we swim
And create
New electricity,
New hope
For you and me
Amid this
Eccentricity.
We are building
A new vision
A zeitgeist
As our ripples
Create
What will surely be.
Opher 4.9.2015
That turned out lovely! How in the world can you do that from just I tiny comment, and so quickly! I love what it says. And I hope it is more prophecy than poem! Well done, Opher!
Why thank you. I loved that idea of energy never wearing out. It inspired me. My head is like a washing machine of ideas churning around. Sometimes they coalesce together. Hmmmmm – that could be another poem!
😀
Still churning!!
Reblogged this on Opher's World and commented:
A poem to a better future. We build the zeitgeist.